2012년 8월 6일 월요일

Argumentative Essay about Kony 2012


 I agree that we have to save people in Uganda. They did nothing but Joseph Kony was chasing them. Girls, boys neither of them had to do harsh works. Some people might think that he is alive but some people might think that he died before. But I think that he is still alive. Most people say that he has 30,000 kids that he kidnapped. If he died, the children can escape. You might think that there might be soldiers that agrees with his opinion. But, there are 30.000 kids, they might have done demonstrations to the army. Even though you might thinnk that soldiers are more stronger. However, the kids are more bigger in numbers. So what I wanted to say is to get involved in the TRI and donate money.Although, it is a small number lots of people can do that and it will add up into a big number and help them alot. Also, at this time, we can't buy the action kit because so many people bought it so it is unable to by it now. This means that many people believe that Kony is alive and has thoughts to catch him.
I HOPE LOTS OF PEOPLE READA THIS AND BE INVOLVED IN THE TRI.

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  1. I liked to read tour thoughts on Kony 2012. However, since it is an argumentative essay try to think why others might disagree about Kony 2012 and explain. Also a bit of paragraphing might do better! :)

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